wow!
this is so beautiful in a dark way...!
its kinda has two ways of forming in the mind.
at first i saw the violent side kinda of being sucidal maybe cause of a break-up or hard times.
but then it could go as a metaphor.
reminded me of a cupple days ago,.I felt like I was stabbed in the back,
my vision was going black.
You looked in my eyes
for a moment- just a moment.
me and my ex got in a huge fight and he said some really mean things and i felt so betrayed and as i tryed to hold in my tears my vision was all blurry
![Confused :?](./images/smilies/icon_confused.gif)
great poem!
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